awesome work buddy!

il give this a 10 on 10 that what you're worth paul don't ever quit! ur the best!

Very Poor Trailer

Oki, listen up, il be telling you the bad things and the good things of this:

-Good Things
Well the songs where good and the drawings where oki

-Bad things
The intro sucked ass lol, u really over did the timing on you're introduction, an introduction should never be that long with writting, it was getting very boring, my advise is FIX you're horrible spelling and reduce the time on you're intro and make more animations before posting on newgrounds, not just blinking eyes lol and a picture of a background house made with paints XD, oki? and uh sorry but before u can make a series, you need to make one that actually looks decent in here lol, alright cya waste 10mins on this :\

that was awesome, goodjob tention!!!!

everything was creative and very smooth i love your style and i think you should do fullbody now i think your ready for it.